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Pisceans Sure Know How To Kiss
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Pisceans Sure Know How To Kiss |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
)(This new sensual love song came out of inspiration of curiously studying astrological compatibilities, with Pisces known to be one of the best matches for Scorpios like me, and daydreaming of kissing a Pisces girl! (giggles) Here's a tribute to all you romantic Piscean lovers out there, LOL! (blushes)  ) Pisceans Sure Know How To Kiss By: Noah Eaton 11/9/05 Whispering beyond the misted curtains, her soft sea green eyes shimmering with uncertain, lost in bead-curtained fantasia. double-dipped in moonstone, No one can deny she’s a goddess, with tamed lips rouged in red grape pomace, soft-covered in still waters, contemplating the lotus, atoned... Glissading through my bloodstream, like the rising, rejuvenated manatee, she’s the oxygen in my blood breathing. Her sweet surrender washes over any cicatrice, her body rises like a swelling abyss, I taste her selflessness dripping into my orifice… ...mmm, mmm, Pisceans sure know how to kiss... . . . She wears Amphitrite’s mantle like a bathrobe, I love the way the prisms drip from her earlobes, just under the surface you’re always ritualizing, whispering of the dolphins, slowly my fingertips begin disrobing your water, inhaling the dessert of your starry-eyed moisture, long-lasting frothing tide, rushing from your ocean to my lips... Glissading through my bloodstream, like the rising, rejuvenated manatee, she’s the oxygen in my blood breathing. Her sweet surrender washes over any cicatrice, her body rises like a swelling abyss, I taste her selflessness dripping into my orifice… ...mmm, mmm, Pisceans sure know how to kiss… . . . Mmmmm, mmmmm, I love how it feels, When your surrender washes over me... . . . Mmmmm, mmmmm, I love how it feels, when your surrender washes over me... . . . She’s compassion, zen and damiana, lathering the deepest wonders of me, running my fingers through her hair, like a sea horse in coral reef Elysium, inhaling pacifist mystique... ...mmm, mmm, Pisceans sure know how to kiss... "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dearest girl friend is a Pisces and her husband is a Scorpio ~ and it is a match made in heaven! May you find your Pisces princess and live happily ever after.  I enjoyed this sumptuous piece of writing!  Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
She’s compassion, zen and damiana, lathering the deepest wonders of me, running my fingers through her hair, like a sea horse in coral reef Elysium, inhaling pacifist mystique... Wow Noah! This is beautiful! Very much enjoyed. hugs, Chris |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hi, Noah! Sure enjoyed this! Do one for a gemini.....lol! .....jo |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
As a Pisces, I loved this, especially the line: No one can deny she’s a goddess I've been trying to tell everyone that for years!!!! And yes, it's true about the Pisces/Scorpio compatibility. I remember reading somewhere that the love between a Pisces and a Scorpian is never forgotten, even long after they have parted. It's true, I still have a soft spot in my memory for a great love I had with a Scorpio, even though it was nearly 20 years ago. Beautiful write Noah, as always. (And thanks for pointing out how great we Pisces are!!  You can never win or lose If you don't Run the race Psychedelic Furs - Love My Way |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Awwwwwww, thank y'all sooooooo very much for your wonderful comments as always, I really appreciate them! I love every sign in the Zodiac in their own special, unique ways, and to be honest I can't wait to be surprised in what sign my girl is born under! I guess I've just heard Pisces are both compatible and beautiful kissers and that just got me swooning in daydreams, but I've heard Cancers, Capricorns and Virgos also click well with Scorpios like me, yay, and indeed I have friends that are other signs, yay! (giggles) Yay! Even though Geminis are not known for being compatible with Scorpios, LOL, I'd love to write a poem honoring you playful, fun-spirited Gemini lovers of life, yay! (smiles) Patience, young grasshooper, LOL!  Yay, thanks everyone! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Noah, Sometimes when I read you, your pure sweetness seeps through to me. I always feel like you are the adult version of my still child nephew.  and that is a good thing."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you never cease to amaze this was a stunning write, full of breathtaking imagry. Noah, your a blessing |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
As always Sweet Angel O' Mine...you keep me happy with your melodies and your words that write themselves within me! Very sensual..."mmm...mmm..." I really loved this one my Sweet Gypsy! Thank you for the dance. On a slightly unrelated note...I'm a Libra...how does the matchup look between Scorpios and Libras...good I hope...b/c I love you everytime I see your name!! Very lovely write my dear friend!! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine Still shrouded in blinding Darkness |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, well yes dear Noah, I have to agree about Pisceans ... being one myself. That is ... I am not a girl anymore, but I certainly REMEMBER! And the Scorpio who "once" entered my life can't be erased from memory either. Linda Goodman once wrote in one of her fantastic books "Sorry there are not enough Piscean girls for all men ...". Haha. A FABULOUS WRITE, my beautiful young and passionate friend. May the right girl materialize quickly! Love and angel hugs. Margherita |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
Awesome write! Very hot! Going to take a cold shower now. Peace, bgj |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very sweet and sensual Noah! I enjoyed the read! ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
yes we do know how to kiss, and with everything we do, it is passionate, and romantic. I am a fellow Piscean... KISS THY RED RUBY LIPS My love kiss thy red ruby lips, Let thy soft tender kiss enchant me, Cast loves' passionate spell all around thee, Moist, succulant, tender, devine, Kissing, caressing , would thouest be mine, These red ruby lips await thy pleasure, Golden showers of warm juicy treasures, Kisses without breath in between, A kiss to share, a kiss without measure, Kiss thy red ruby lips, my love, Kiss thy hand ever so sweetly, Kiss thy check, thine eyes, completly, I desire to feel thy passion flowing, Flowing unto thy lips, As your tongue slowly outlines my lips, I am enthralled unto heavenly bliss, Awainting another sensual kiss, Unto these Red Ruby lips. For after just one kiss, From thy red Ruby lips, Thine would be mine, Mine alone, For no imagination, Every passionate sensation, Cannot compare to thy kiss for you, After the kiss is through, One qustion alone ,I shall ask, Will one kiss be enough to finish this task? and the astrology reads me to a tee, Romantic, love, artistic, etc. Your words described me well...I LOVE KISSES!MMMMMMMMMMM! Thank you for seeing us as we are! ~ARh What is a Kiss? So softly, Yet touching anothers lip. The moist sensitive motion of two forces meeting together for the first time. As the wind blows over and touches the mountains, softly I kiss your lips, The taste of berries kissed by the dew, I taste of your lips, A warm embrace, a hug of the face, This is a kiss, A gesture of passion so flaming with fire, but gentle and soft, A romantic attire. A greeting of hellos and goodbyes, An expression of "I LOVE YOU", Without saying one word. A step beyond friendship, A first broken boundary of communication without words. A kiss is the only form of deep affection, Onethat lingers inside the heart and mind. A memory that forever remains and reflects throught the ages of time... This is a kiss devine! "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (11-16-2005 12:08 AM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hey Noah Guess what??? I'm a piscean too!!lol I am overly sensitive, emotional, etc. etc. That's me alright! Thank you for sharing an enchanting piece with us. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...a joy to read...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 lovin the spirit in you.....this does indeed show just that....hugsssss you |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
another pisces here. My spirit will rise |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
ahh this was a wonderful read, very well flowing, thanks for sharing this, keep up the awesome song writing and poetry!!!! Poetry can get you very far |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mmm...Mmm that's one deep kiss and one deep expression of it. Whan Scorpio's write of dreams it seems the world stops to listen and dream anew themselves. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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