Open Poetry #36 |
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The Date |
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evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
Listen to the rain she said, pouring down out back I looked out the window, the sky was black I sat at the table while she made me some tea Her dog came in and started licking me It was our first date though I’d known her some time We met when I started the job at the mine With the bad weather out we decided to stay in We sat on the couch talking and then A knock on the door, she said "Who could that be?" Her old boyfriend and he was looking for me He pushed right past her and headed my way With a look in his eyes that left nothing to say I jumped up and took on a fighting stance Ready to swing when given the chance Then he stopped in his tracks and started to cry And he told me he loved her and asked me if I Would let him talk to her for a minute or two I looked at her face and right then I knew That she still loved him regardless of me A hard truth to swallow, a hard truth to see So I stepped aside and let them go Into the kitchen where they talked kinda’ low I slipped out the front door and got in my car Started driving away and hadn’t gone far When my phone started ringing, I could see it was her She was calling to thank me and I knew for sure That I’d done the right thing by walking away I’d be going to their wedding one of these days I could’ve stayed and made trouble for him But I knew what I did was better for them I’d been in that spot and felt so down It’s the reason I had moved into that town. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I have this mental list of my favorite writers here on pip...you have joined them. ![]() "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm with Susan, enjoyed this extremely |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Looks like you have a fan club. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write...from the heart |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed....that's a gentleman! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I thought this was so cool, had to come back to it again |
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