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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
She said with a purpose pay for what you did funny thing was I thought I already had 15 years of I guess I 'll be wrong again I lived this bruise and sorry mom anger is a weakness does it make you feel strong? you are as weak as I left you how does it taste? when he taste the distaste of your heart [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (11-10-2005 07:26 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm not sure what this is about exactly, but it feels painful and strong... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Jason, this left me questioning alot of things....I found it to be very deep. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
innapropriate content? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This oozes with deep emotion, and can sense the pain in it. Very well expressed Jason. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
My guess this is about a child that is made to feel bad for merely existing...  Whether I am right or wrong..I liked it very much. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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