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Open Poetry #36

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-11-09 03:48 PM

Amid the long grasses
Of a summer meadow

In a park
Beneath peach blossoms

She still moves
As I would have her

However—the truth
Might be

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2005-11-09 04:01 PM

Is this a memory of a loved one lost. It sure reads like it. However it has some wonderful images. Good job.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2005-11-09 04:39 PM

oops sorry...giggle

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2005-11-09 04:40 PM

i have to go be a deputy now (night shift) when i get in in the morning look for.... " Livingston"

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

4 posted 2007-04-21 02:20 PM

"In a park
Beneath peach blossoms"
you must know that a world in a prose written by Tao Yun Ming as his dreaming, non-existing world. this prose to Chinese is like Bergerking to American.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

5 posted 2010-06-24 07:19 AM

You seem to have an understanding of Eastern thought. Nice.

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