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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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Waukegan
0 posted 2005-11-09 11:01 AM


A rabbit dying—
Autumn crying
Through leafless trees
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Sharksbean
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jax
1 posted 2005-11-09 12:39 PM

nice write, though a little disturbing. thanks for writing and keep up the great poetry

-may the force be with you in poetry
bgj
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Ga. USA
2 posted 2005-11-09 03:08 PM

Everthing dies and sometimes we all cry! Good write,
bgj
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Gaia
3 posted 2005-11-09 03:19 PM

another reality snapshot
Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-04-21 02:25 PM

must whine for the taint.

still beautiful poem.
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