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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Often I often turn a page of read And think upon its planted seed The pros and con of Avalon The white and black of human swan Proselyte the will and be Horizons of the open sea The obligate of whale and sail The nuance of our wail and bail But in the dark I found the mean Within a dream the sorted scene The rose of red within my bed Those touch my senses till I’m dead And I am satisfied the wile The innocuousness of style The infinity of store And evermore of metaphor I sleep my way to Shangri-la Each night the door is left ajar |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I see you skill and expression continues to excel Always a pleasure to read, And ponder the deep sweet thoughts of your mind Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh I have sorely missed you dear poet of touching the senses... this was magnifcant!  Morning dear one |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
... the door is left ajar ... yes, just so. And your readers too are always satisfied with what you have to offer, more than that, it's always a delight to read you, dear Seymour! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The evermore of metaphor...I like how that phrase sounds. Well done Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Sir Tumbleweed! I especially enjoyed the closing lines~ "I sleep my way to Shangri-la Each night the door is left ajar" ~What a lovely thought! Sweet dreams!  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I sleep my way to Shangri-la Each night the door is left ajar" Did I ever tell you how much you make me smile each morning?  Well ya do yanno?! Thank you for this lovely piece you have gifted us with this morn. ~Smiles, Hugs & a cup of Chai, Nancy~ Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely Seymour. Might I join you and my sister for a spot of tea? Thankyou.  hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "I sleep my way to Shangri-la Each night the door is left ajar" You're not alone! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy? Want to see a compliment? /pip/Forum93/HTML/002768.html Thank you for all you've taught me! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Haven't been answering because I have a miserable cold and cough. But you still are my sunshine.   |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hope you get to feeling better soon, my friend... This is wonderful! *S* |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
A very intresting write. I enjoyed it. Lots of luck, bgj |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wonderful write Sy. To spend time in dreaming is a wonderful thing if you aren't delerious or dying. I had a problem with wile in line thirteen, I kept wanting it to be while. But maybe that's just me. Excellent job with word use. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I sleep my way to Shang-ri-La" and then you write about it and let me in as stow-away. thank you lovie It is truly lovely in your travels. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Thank you for leaving the door ajar. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bet you're sleeping right now, too, Sy! Hope you're having wonderful dreams! This was beautiful. ....jo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I sleep my way to Shangri-la Each night the door is left ajar" dang it, Karen beat me to the words I like best... no matter... Just so you know I loved them too! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" ~Unknown~ |
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