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Open Poetry #36

Love Came (senryu ...)

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

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Waukegan

0 posted 2005-11-07 08:15 AM

With sunset colors—
He blew out the candle—
With a fart

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-11-07 04:31 PM

Hmmm.

I've heard of kids (usually boys) doing this sorta thing.

I've also heard that those who do stop at adulthood, or at least the onset of puberty.

(Hair being flammable and all...)

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-11-08 01:34 AM

LOL.........at the senryu and at Serenity's comment..............heheheheh

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2005-11-08 01:44 AM

Iliana,

Thanks. . .

The critical attribute of a senryu
is it's comic character
reflecting on the frailties and foibles
of human being.

Yet like:

how long
forever
nineteen nineteen
of white dancers

Anonymous (senryu)

there is at least
one other
more poignant way
of reading this.

Thanks again.

John

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-11-08 05:49 AM

not what I expected~~~
*laughing*
M

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-11-08 08:13 AM

says in no uncertain terms, that he screwed up, big time...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-11-08 08:53 AM

Heh Heh...the first post I read this morning...
Thanks for starting my day with a smile!

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

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