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Open Poetry #36

Something I Have To Find

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-11-07 03:52 AM

Something I Have To Find

My mind going to and fro
Searching for the vital clue
I began seeking answers
Still without a breakthrough

The need to end confusion
For my own peace of mind
With a gap in the picture
It's something I have to find

My mind is needing clarity
Yet I have racked my brain
The puzzle I have to solve
As I keep searching in vain

I could continue guessing
My mind does need peace
Still the search goes on
For that one missing piece

Hope ©2005
Link to poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/94/poem_791897.html

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-11-07 08:58 AM

Dear Hope, center yourself, take a deep breath and ask your angels for guidance. Everything will fall into place. I wish you peace. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-11-08 01:42 AM

Hope, I do know what you mean and I like the fact that a person could read a second meaning to this poem

....jo

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2005-11-08 03:48 AM

Don't we all go through such a thing
trying to find that missing piece

Thank you for putting in so wonderfully

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-11-08 06:00 AM

sometimes you have to let go~~

Hoping you get your answers

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-11-08 08:06 AM

My mind is needing clarity
Yet I have racked my brain
The puzzle I have to solve
As I keep searching in vain

some answers are never to be found, others, well, simply put, someday, when you are engrossed in other thoughts, it will tap you on the shoulder, warmly turning a light on.

Nice write

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