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Open Poetry #36
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0 posted 2005-11-06 09:55 PM


Love with tender pain
Devotion gives new danger
Desire so perfect
Yet love glows hot in us
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1 posted 2005-11-06 11:43 PM

this is wonderful!

I liked this line....

"Devotion gives new danger"
you ain't kidding!
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