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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-11-05 10:17 AM



By the sty
In print dress
With wool scarf

As if life itself
Were not enough

What light bent
On petty argument

Over nothing

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aujussy wolf
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1 posted 2005-11-19 09:40 PM


As if life itself
Were not enough

What light bent
On petty argument

Over nothing


    
  
short and sweet , i liked this, sometimes we don't have to use a hundred words to describe one feeling , nice work .... i felt
like i was watching for a second
thanks for sharing ~wolf

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