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What Lies Beneath
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What Lies Beneath |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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What lies beneath the quiet? That one could give voice and let life live again, what lies? Here, beneath the quiet of now, where truths were hushed, and some dream was… enhanced. Just what lies beneath the quiet? Where skills of sequence, and sequins were dreamed of; where visions, but revisions were made; where love was a dream worth living, and lives were a dream just laid. Down into tracks of mystery down into traces that ruin down into shadows forever… spots on the face of some moon. Here, where the quiet still lingers, but the heart of a heart goes on… here, in the tempest of noon, then in the spring of an august long gone… oh what lies beneath the quiet, some strange departed love affair… where shadows are brilliant in sunlight, and sunlight…is no longer there. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
(((wow)))  this is amazing...whispery soft |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and when you are inspired m'Sunshinygirl... YOU do one hell of a job.  WOW!  m xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"here, in the tempest of noon, then in the spring of an august long gone… oh what lies beneath the quiet, some strange departed love affair… where shadows are brilliant in sunlight, and sunlight…is no longer there." Beautifully penned Karilea... The 'mood' in this one touches me. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love the softness of your words, Karilea~~ M |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh golly...... What I said to Suthern just now...that sometimes the eyes blur.... oh heck, I can't say it better than that, I'll have to let you go see..... /pip/Forum93/HTML/003064.html You just brought out the man in me. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea "oh what lies beneath the quiet, some strange departed love affair… where shadows are brilliant in sunlight, and sunlight…is no longer there." I love the sound of this, and...it seems you have answered your own question.  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, this was a real treat to read this morning with my coffee  Hugs2u Coco |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is wonderful, Karilea, my friend. You are a marvelous poetess. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I was rushed this morning, but am glad I can now drink this in with my flavoured coffee. A true treasure for sure. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Secret memories in the heart surfacing and ebbing in silence. It's a treat to read. Rae |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Karilea This is sooo wonderful and soft. Thank you for ever shining words *Hugs* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
It is writes like this that make me so very glad that I have finally gotten back on line and have moments here and there to read while settling in... yes Momma K, I have missed your words. Hugs. live for today, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Here, beneath the quiet of now, where truths were hushed, and some dream was… and still is, only more nurished, more mature... enhanced. Just what lies beneath the quiet? yes indeedy, tis true Where skills of sequence, and sequins were dreamed of; where visions, but revisions were made; where love was a dream worth living, and lives were a dream just laid. as of destiny Down into tracks of mystery down into traces that ruin down into shadows forever… but from those shodows spring forth new rejuvination, new understanding, new love in the face of forgiveness... spots on the face of some moon. some moon that was at one time the greatness of both.... Here, where the quiet still lingers, but the heart of a heart goes on… and indeed it will, stronger, wiser, fuller.... here, in the tempest of noon, then in the spring of an august long gone… perhaps long gone, but indeed more refined, within oh what lies beneath the quiet, some strange departed love affair… a love that you once believed in, and know now, your ability to love is far beyond any capicity you ever dreamed of...in your patience, and your ability of perception...growth.... where shadows are brilliant in sunlight, and sunlight…is no longer there.  Oh she's there brilliant lady, she's there and always will be, more poignant then ever before, and even more beautiful....Your a vision of truth, and all that is good, it is through imperfection we become.... Your a wonder!!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Where skills of sequence, and sequins were dreamed of; where visions, but revisions were made; where love was a dream worth living, and lives were a dream just laid." How well I understand....you said it so well!!!! And, SIL, that ending....OH MY GOSH.....!!!!!! ....jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beneath the quiet? There's substance, dear lady... and heart. Beautiful write!!! |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
I enjoyed reading this. Great write, lots of luck, bgj |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I can see how it is that you are a published author, you have such a wonderful lyrical way with words, even when you whisper. Excellent assonance in this piece. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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