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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I realize now, about your perfume it was only the night sky all along I remember it was the first time when your shoulders were bare and I was behind you in horizons it was the poetry you had written in invisible ink along your neck small enough I had to get close with my eyes to read the words but your skin made my mouth speak and you said I had smiles on my lips and you blotted them with your cheek and touched my hand with your waist accidentally at first then on purpose with subtle palisade you made me I tried to pull away but pretended failure and you spilled your laughter on my shirt then took it off me to wash it invisible you kissed the cicatrix's of my caution with the feathered ends of your fingers and as morning you were a stranger's dawn __________ daark |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
enjoyed this early morning read... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I must agree with Martin... this is a beautiful sunrise... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I realize now, about your perfume it was only the night sky all along I remember it was the first time when your shoulders were bare and I was behind you in horizons it was the poetry you had written in invisible ink along your neck small enough I had to get close with my eyes to read the words but your skin made my mouth speak ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I tried to pull away but pretended failure and you spilled your laughter on my shirt then took it off me to wash it invisible you kissed the cicatrix's of my caution with the feathered ends of your fingers and as morning you were a stranger's dawn ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you taught me a new word today....I love when that happends reading poetry. thank you o wise sensi of word sighs and mouth speak skies.  Thru the water...thru the rain |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yep...you have some kind of magic mister...  this is amazing |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and you said I had smiles on my lips and you blotted them with your cheek and touched my hand with your waist accidentally at first then on purpose with subtle palisade you made me incredible, delectable writing enjoyed |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks friends you bless me with your eyes and your keyspeak |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dark, this is fabulous! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always enjoy your words My spirit will rise |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) As always, your poetry is soooooooo romantic, dearest friend, recently I have missed reading your lovely poetry very much as it deeply influences me in how I can open up to my dream lover when I find her and be just that kind of pure romantic you are! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great writing, wish I had the words. Jason |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I aspire...to bring forth such poetry. Perhaps someday I will again. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a smile full of grace~ whispers that cause a heart to race~ darkness that sheds light~ embraces all just right~ My spirit will rise |
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