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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-11-02 07:31 PM



The single star
A silver
Solitary brigadier
In the Western sky

Please tell
Who ever it is
You’re reporting to
Thank you Sir

Autumn again
Is beautiful
The air so cool
And deeply blue

Seas are calm
The wind is fair—
And I’m okay



© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2005-11-02 08:40 PM


Nice. Simple and nice. I like it.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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2 posted 2007-04-21 06:40 PM


it is nice ot know everything is ok.

nice poem.

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