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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-11-02 07:11 PM

Equal Time

And so I smile at the thoughts
that sometimes invade my privacy,
making me want
what I cannot have at the moment.

With dedication an "always"
and interlude dancing a dream away,
the end becomes the beginning
when my colors run together.

I can't change time
to make the minutes last,
but I can make the last
become my first
and hold onto
what lies within, unspoken,
until all differences are mute.

And so I smile my words
and taste my happiness for now,
because I feel timeless
when looking out through the in
of my soul.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2005-11-02 07:18 PM

Maureen, this is so beautiful.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2005-11-02 07:25 PM

Very cleverly done dear girl. Fun to read.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-11-02 08:03 PM

"And so I smile at the thoughts
that sometimes invade my privacy,
making me want
what I cannot have at the moment"

yes...yes...feelin that for sure...

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2005-11-02 11:55 PM

You define the beauty in a cherished moment, even if that's all there is.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

what lies within, unspoken,
until all differences are mute.

And so I smile my words
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

you make me smile too, Maureen~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2005-11-03 05:46 AM

Thank you Sue, and Larry I am not sure if it's clever..just thoughts that invaded me at the time...

Thank you Susan.

and Lori...I miss you and hope you are well..
I have been busily working and you know how that can tire one out early in the evening...maybe I can catch you this weekend.

p.s. if you ever come this way please let me know... love you
Maureen

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