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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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A reddened maple In some distress Begins at night To shed her dress For one Last Fling |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~brilliant!~ I love this one, John! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it's like two lovers rejoining in a world, all for them... Good one... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Nicely done. RMW |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Perfect. *S* |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
She surly is not ashamed to be nacked in the pure eyes of the snow. the mood is more stressed than the maple. oh! life. who said that " if you imagine differently, you will have a new view of the world"? nice poem. |
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