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Bewitched
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Bewitched |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Bewitched The night that clings, the smoothed black, a shapely elm, deeply notched to better keep secrets dark as a flight of geese across the moon's face, deep within October's closet these, and more hang latent. RMW [This message has been edited by RMW (11-01-2005 10:24 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob Lovely!!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
now I like this one..seems a bit different though~~  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very much enjoyed the read...nice one. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Martie, M, and Enchantress ... Thank you for taking a moment. Alas, I think that this particular offering needs more like ... an hour. Much to tinkering to do I'm afraid. But thank you anyway. Bob |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice indeed. Enjoyed. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this truly spoke Halloween and creates a movie in the readers eyes wanting more... |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Chris and Lee ..... thank you both. Bob |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed the visual imagery, the sight of a flight of geese against the fall moon. Nice! |
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