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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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before you, there were ghosts at best as lost and lifeless as i, then whispering phantom words forever.. always.. and the other, the one i'd excised until you, i'd only known the word it's now i understand |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Whew.. you have a way with words, ya know. I always thought maybe I was... ha! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 People in hell are iceskating...  and that is a really good thing.*bigfathugs* "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply stunning... enjoyed |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yer beautiful Bello and so are your words. I's bin a waitin fer dis ting ting  mxx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
WOW Raph! Absolutely perfect, just perfect writing. MUCH ENJOYED!  seek the flame within yourself |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
many thanks for the lovely comments..and the smartass ones too lol. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh, spill the beans because I love this . . . |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
EXCELLENT!!!!   ~Let peace begin with me... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You make me feel peaceful, tearful - 'girly girl' - manly voice! (hahaaaaaaa) I really havent the words 'cept for, I love you. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love it! - Owl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
nodding here too it's like life becomes divided into a then that makes you shudder, just remembering, and the now of oxygen. enjoyed this, you!  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I enjoyed Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A light, light touch....and so effective. It makes me think of a poem a two dear friends of mine wrote together, about a word but without saying it. The word I don't mind saying here is, scintillating. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I DO LIKE THIS!!!!!!!! Much enjoyed, Raph.  ....jo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
it IS a most beautiful thing . . . made me smile all night . . . (thank you) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thank you all, karen, perfect description |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 NOW,I want more. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
until you, i'd only known the word it's now i understand Oh, yes. *S* Have you been reading my diary? *S* I wish I'd written this... I know every word... Beautiful!!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
now this.... makes me smile beautiful and sooooooo sweet...  |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Great Job! Always a delight. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
meant to comment a few times and forgot...(hey im 50 now....lol) nice mush stuff raffi....... the taste of love sure is sweet |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Reading this made my year, and since its a New Year now, i'd thought i'd re-read and let it make this year. and it did and it does! Did that make any sense? I think i may have epilated braincells, not just leg hair. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 This was beautiful!!!!!!! I LOVE this! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Raph The word won't hurt you. I think it would be good for you to go outside at midnight tonight and yell the word as loud as you can. I'm touched by your feelings in this poem and happy for you. |
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