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The Now in Blend
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The Now in Blend |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Now in Blend I watch my thoughts though visioned dim As weeding takes over and I'm thinking of him. All the past that before me had made up my life, And the sadness accompanied, this ending of wife. I wonder if back then when mistakes were the norm Could forget and forgive kept the calming of storm. Or was changing an ever, an always transformed Becoming what is left the was so unwarmed... I wonder too much, so often I'm told But the changes in life leave me left without hold. Stolen from me, the presence of love Diminished and tarnished with thoughts always of... My life was as perfect as perfect could be, At least in my heart those years were for me . Until I was lost in a world spinning down And the new of another left me in this town. So small minded all, with no words of the known, I just wondered and searched till I lived my alone. Though I weed and I think and I wonder what if's I can only envision the now of these gifts. The friends I have made, the caring since then, The hands touched and reaching, words shared from pen. The past came before me, the present shall be But the now has inspired these feelings in me. M *evomx5's beautiful rhythm and rhyming brought some out in me after reading~~ "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
wonderful rhythm and rhyming.... Beautiful piece.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A delightful write and a delightful read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 thank you for sharing your feelings |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed the rhyme, but even more, I enjoyed the contemplative quality of this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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