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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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pause pruning wild honeysuckle hummingbird needs a last sip now I can finish |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed I like this...they are determined little guys...and have noisy wings. A sensitive sharing...thanks!!  |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Ed, How odd yours should remind me of: morning glory— the well-bucket entangled I beg for water Chiyo-ni John |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow, that is a rarified atmosphere...I hope I don't get dizzy! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice Ed. Enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of watching the gecko's run when I use the weed wacker...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
We do need those pauses to look at the little miracles, don't we! Enjoyed this pause today, RatL! ......jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ What a poignantly felt 'pause'~  LOL @ JamesMichael~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One pause deserves another...   |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
cool write! and John, thank you for that  at James reply |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sometimes it is indeed beautiful to pause for the little things in life..... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed the entire feel of this thread, everyone's comments and as for the pause, depicted with greatness.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is delightful!!! *S* And so is a poet who'd make that pause. Wonderful write... I love this! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh if only you knew how much I love hummingbirds, you would know how much I love this......thank you for reminding me of them, it seems a long winter until they return |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxquisite! _ Owl |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love this one. The pause for the hummingbird's last sip--lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
lovely ed, we do so much to impede nature, it's nice to get out of the way once and share in it too |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A pause that refreshed both you and the hummingbird!   |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a cool write. I bet that hummer was very appreciative of one last sip. Enjoyed this very much, especially on a snowy afternoon! TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I am so glad I didn't miss this Ed! The hummingbird is my favourite. Good of you to stop and let him have another sip. Hugs~Nancy  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Ed All it takes is a pause sometimes, a stepping aside to allow other creatures to get what they need...The bird has rewarded you with its beauty, for the favor.. now you can continue your work... enjoyed ----------ice ><> |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Good poem, Mr. cummings e.e. to read, e.e. to like |
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