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Kickin' up leaves
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Kickin' up leaves |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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First comes the yellow tumbling down tears of the treetops kissing the ground leaf onto journey brushing the sky calpyso of children and the cirrus clouds high drunk on the moonlight eyes of the child puzzles unraveled leaves going wild kicken up autumn feet jammim' rhymes pissing off park rangers leaves stray their lines dont come to seek wisdom in the write of these dots can't figure out life rather gather forget me nots no problems this sunday as im feeling the floyd dark side of the moon loveless love i'll avoid jargon of gypies don't you know what i mean? if you'd ring me with sanity i'd never feel this serene........(jellybean  ) |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this made me smile, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and this is what you meant when you told me to go jumping through the leaves? *smile* do this, again . . . tomorrow (look at you with your kitties) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I really enjoyed this, Michelle! Reminded me of raking up piles of autumn leaves and then jumping in them.....good memories!  ........jo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ohhh, I love the Pink...the dark side and if you have time to spare please kick some leaves for me today  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
could use a little leaf kickin up today...one of those days.. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Fairies adrift, bright Colors falling down, as leaves Old thoughts rising up Memories-forget-me-nots Gathered from the moons dark side I think I might have "Brain Damage" "I can't think of anything to say except... I think it's marvelous! HaHaHa!" -----------ice ><> |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very much enjoyed the carefree feeling of this...and this dont come to seek wisdom in the write of these dots can't figure out life rather gather forget me nots liked very much the non-concerned desire to simply let go of mind clogs and open everything up to the senses, allowing life to come in... enjoyed this morning read |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OMG Michele...this is wonderful! So uplifting and we have the perfect weather for kicking up some leaves today. I'm headed outside!!!! Hugs YOU! Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
reminds me of good times in upstate NY....good job! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for kickin with me for a spin |
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