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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2005-10-30 02:43 PM


Late October—
What figures a shadow
On yellow leaves
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DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04
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1 posted 2005-10-30 03:38 PM

Not closing yet, the leaves r still green here, Is this suppose to be a Haiku?
I thought that was 5 7 5 ????
But to respond in kind, which is what I understand this form is all about

It’s almost Winter
Waiting for cold and color
Then bring on the snow
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with you
2 posted 2005-10-30 03:45 PM

before the snow comes
let this Autumn bring me rain
soothing, healing rain
Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-04-21 07:07 PM

the last bee.
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