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0 posted 2005-10-29 06:37 PM



I use to dream of the perfect love,
Coming silently in the morning dew,
Asking me to sail with it upwards,
Amongst the clouds we rested,
As we look downwards and saw,
The end of the rainbow,
No pot of gold found there,
Only lover’s smiles filled it with gleam,
We held each other tight,
Not for the fear of losing,
Then came the night,
All the angles flew away,
Two of us were left alone now,
I slept between your hips,
And dreamt of seeing you smile-
With tomorrows morning light.


I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-10-30 01:53 AM


I like this very much!
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2 posted 2005-10-30 12:57 PM


Ronil~
Lovely ... breathlessly lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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3 posted 2005-10-30 03:53 PM


Sometime u find when not lookin
or when neither can C, this I know

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