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Open Poetry #36

Belonging

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-10-29 12:31 PM

Belonging

One of my favorite things
about her was her hair,
the way it would softly
hang there, tapping on
her shoulder...

And then there was the look
in her eyes, as she'd swear
she never told no lies, well maybe,
every now and then a few,
but before that night was through,
all my broken dreams had come true
and my doubts and fears fell apart,
while kissing the lips
belonging to my sweetheart.

JamesLee
October24
2005

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2005-10-29 12:33 PM

sweetly romantic James

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-10-29 02:23 PM

You really are an old romantic James

Dave

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-10-31 11:25 PM

Thank you Sea and Bodger for the nice responses...James

Ratleader

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4 posted 2005-11-21 03:00 PM

....I think I'll just sit here for a while....I mean, I don't think anybody'd mind...if I were to....just...sit....here....for....a....while........

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Martie

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5 posted 2005-11-21 03:04 PM

Sweet feeling!!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

6 posted 2005-11-21 06:18 PM

Very good romantic poem, James.
I enjoyed it.
Hugs,
Ethel

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