Open Poetry #36 |
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Love Still Remains |
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evomx5 Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 52Atlanta, GA |
The wind blew cold from the shore of the lake The car was packed with all she could take She climbed in and started her trip back home A trip she dreaded, being all alone She was leaving the cabin, their vacation retreat Built from the love he laid at her feet And furnished with treasures they picked with care Her favorite, a little glass teddy bear That he bought on a business trip long ago And gave to her one night when it snowed 'Cause he knew how she loved them and what it would mean To love her and please her was always his dream And it carried him out on the road one night He had seen one in town that he knew would delight As he came down the road to a dangerous curve He lost control as the car made a swerve A man came to the door later that night She was missing him and filled with fright And he told her the news that would break her in two When they got to him, there was nothing they could do Devastated, she dropped to her knees And asked the Lord, "Why couldn't it be me?" Then, a voice inside she had never heard Spoke to her the most comforting words "He loved you it's true, with all of his heart And he never wanted to be apart But he wants you to know that through all of the pain He'll be with you, his love still remains". |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
*sniff* dang it. I am at work! I can not have the people here know I have real feelings!! ![]() yet another superb story. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...oh my. You have a wonderful talent for writing gripping tales. Well done..very well done!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, yes...you are making me want to pull out some from the archives to share with you... Story poems...I even love the sad ones! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful writing shared~~ M |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am smiling wide here in Canada to see your wonderful work as part of this great site. Printing them out as fast as they are up ![]() |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, it does...James |
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Elven Angel Junior Member
since 2005-07-14
Posts 10 |
oh my..that was really quite sad. Well written and full of emotion. well done ^_^ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you're good at these I'm a fan |
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