Open Poetry #36 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
when you run through the streets with your long gown tearing on the hedges of sand I smile at how you slip on the cobblestones and fall slowly so I will always have time to be under you with my arms you came back this morning like a tip toe lover but you honked so I would be ready and would open the car door of your pedestrian and watch you on the stairs that were built special just for you to walk down I smell him on you my favorite perfume really you call it a taste and when you wear it I know you are hungry and want to go to the movies at the blind theatre but you won't wear gloves this time I promise to hold your hand or at least your wrists and make you do it til the intermission is over and the round room spins again may I hold your tattoos too while you bathe there in the sand of our saliva please say no and let me take you ______________ dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (10-28-2005 08:51 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there is to this a depth, beyond what is... an all knowing sense, of what speaks to us in the outer core of what we may claim, even if just for a moment, it is ours, and all else becomes unimportant... Like God's voice, shivering us.... exceptional write and pleasurable read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
humble thanks lee j.. you smile me |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
~love your twists, darkie~ ~babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms bbg..lil one, you are candy and my hound loves sweets thank you |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
no |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea..oh thank you was hoping for that |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang it... Sue stole my line! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Always love the way you sheath... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunny..oh please say it again. ___________ ms susanC, moi? thanks hon, you please me exsheathingly.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dang it! Sue stole my line! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunny.. additional comments sent through mental mail wink |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
In the darkness, when the flicker of celluloid painted Fellini's dreams over every inch of her skin, It was anything but pedestrian. Mmmmmm... Saturday afternoon matinee's are my favorite! Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and ms indigo, her midnight lace is laceless facing my eyes from a window's prospective she whispers prose activly thank you mon verve |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
My spirit will rise |
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