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...of moonbeams |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Shimmer me in moonlight whispers and dance me there in your dreams I’m restless... my thoughts are just sleepless tantrums so I count to three impatient for the inevitable and it’s then I surrender to your dreams and play the part once more eager to be what you need hoping only to fill the void and soothe the ache mirrored in our eyes when we dance transcendental we are held in pause the vibration of moonbeams captivate and sway us between your dreams and my own..... ~SEA~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
transcendental we are held in pause the vibration of moonbeams captivate ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you know Im loving those lines and images... and how cool is this part... my thoughts are just sleepless tantrums waaay cool.... moth tantrums in the moonlight.  so good to read you tonite Susan.  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you so much Janet...you picked my favorite parts too... I finally had a quiet moment today to finish this one...I figured if I was patient enough, it would come lol  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, it certainly was worth you waiting for just the right words for this one!! This is so beautiful....with a longing written within. I love it, Hon. Hugs, Ethel  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA?... I've been severely slacking in my reading lately... and this?... has reminded me of what I've been missing... Your words are always pure beauty... and this is no exception...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
suesea.. if the sky only knew mmmmmmmm nice by the way more please |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this made me smile.... I’m restless... my thoughts are just sleepless tantrums so I count to three impatient for the inevitable and then we become a new moon... dishelved within the magik of someting which explodes our being...making me feel greater then before, it is like all that has been becomes greater... and so forth.... simply lovely, what this write inspires.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"held in pause the vibration of moonbeams captivate and sway us between your dreams and my own....." Beautiful Sue! Your writing is outstanding.. may we ask for more please? Hugs~Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
reiterating the lines JM quoted... surrender at it's most beautiful. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan, May you forever dance your dreams!  Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Gal, your moonbeamed thoughts fell satin-smooth to the page~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all for the kind words |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Smooth as silk, Sea! Loved that graphic! .....jo |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Awesome.... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Shimmer me in moonlight whispers and dance me there in your dreams .....superb , love the dance part ~wolfie |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is amazing SEA.....and the photo really adds to the gold found within this.....hugsssss |
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