Open Poetry #36 |
lamenting leaves |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Touch them tender as they fall, for where they've been and where they've yet to go, the newborn's cry within the camoflauge of layers now wearing an orange glow, and the face of pink's fresh coat, buried inside next winter's gold, touch them tender as they fall, and know why they must go. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-28-2005 11:11 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice picture! kitty power! and understanding why the leaves must go nicely done, Mish |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I love your take on things, Michelle! So gentle.....tender....well done! |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Autumn seems to be your season . . . John |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
my goodness this is beautiful |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
beautiful !!! i love the pic with the kittys sweetness lata ~wolfman |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Nice picture |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning! I see from your photo that you are a goddess to God's feline creatures as well! The leaves in slow descent ~ around, and around, and around they go ~ and where they land, nobody knows. Your poem reminded me of a ditty we used to say as children while spinning around among the falling leaves Thanks for stirring up pleasant memories! Happy autumnal hugs, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Michele..a lovely write. Hugs~Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InkyOne~ I like the soft susurrus of this one~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
now wearing an orange glow, and the face of pink's fresh coat, buried inside next winter's gold, touch them tender as they fall, and know why they must go. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ How fitting, goldielocks, you are such a pretty little thing. If you only knew how your writing stirs me! Round and round she goes~ I really love this! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yet another that needs bounced back up. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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