Open Poetry #36 |
Melancholy |
Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
You bare the mark of sadness on your soul The heart that beats within you has lost its warm rhythm Your beauty still shines through But just like the fall in October When the leaves of each tree become gold It is always followed by a bitter cold I pray that winter does not find you in this state The gloom alone could douse the fire you hold Bringing a darkness unknown to your heart leaving a sad mold I ask that your memories burn bright of the happy times Allow those to take flight rising from the melancholy depth like a balloon To a resurrected heart that beats to a blissful tune Leaving the sadness to linger away Bring the hope back your way once you do that Life will cleanse your soul slowly starting today |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
let us ...hope |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is very nicely done it feels "hopeful" |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed message , its Spring here , so hopefully my muse will be refreshed Hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tom ~ caring and compassionate words so eloquently and gently expressed... Love & Light, Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Tom, I really loved the love and compassion expressed in this.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I know....geesh...do I know this poem well. I love it! Hope things are well with you. "I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Tom, this read feels like a big warm hug. Yanno, everyone needs an SRO like you around...a Soul's Refreshment Officer :supergroup: |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Leaving the sadness to linger away Bring the hope back your way once you do that Life will cleanse your soul slowly starting today'''' Indeed it will....a new day, a new start.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I felt the cleansing herbs of this song...very lovely and postive, youthful hands smiling.... |
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