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time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

0 posted 2005-10-27 12:22 PM

Under the Cheshire – grin moon
the laughter of children
melts, in the amber drops
of the morning rain.
But I, eagerly awaiting the final silence
am never likely to hear it again.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2005-10-27 12:26 PM

Ouch. I hope that you do hear it again.
It's a beautiful sound...
As I know you know, by reading these words.

Always, Alyssa

Hupomeno.

green_itchy_stuff
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since 2003-06-26

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New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-10-29 02:20 AM

Wow, poem and response both blow me away. Nice write.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

3 posted 2005-10-29 02:50 AM

it reads deeply sad... I hope you are ok

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2005-10-29 10:36 AM

I'm shamed -- two years and I have been unaware of such quality! Gotta get my act together, I do.....

I'm setting myself a pleasurable penance...to go back and look up other things you've written.

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time prophet
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

5 posted 2005-10-30 04:49 PM

GG - I have no doubt i will, it just wont be me thats doing the laughing.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

6 posted 2005-10-30 04:50 PM

GIS - Thank you for the kind words.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

7 posted 2005-10-30 04:55 PM

SEA - Not as sad as it sounds, two small children escaped their mother and ran naked into the morning rain laughing like loons. I was tempted to join them, but then I would have been arrested and branded a pervert. Grandfathers are supposed to be dignified, and their are some who consider me senile enough.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

8 posted 2005-10-30 04:56 PM

Ratleader - From a wordsmith such as yourself, I am flattered by the compliment. Thank you. If you are going back to read other stuff you probably will be doing penance.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

9 posted 2005-10-30 07:15 PM

I suppose that would freak some folks out...

just glad it's not as sad as it seemed...

time prophet
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

10 posted 2005-10-30 07:56 PM

SEA - Believe me, not only freak them out, but they would most likely throw the key away.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2005-10-31 12:50 PM

so maybe you just need some adults to run nekked in the rain with you, laughing like little kids that laugh like loons...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

12 posted 2005-10-31 06:49 AM

laughing at SEA's response...

and glad you explained the meaning...

~smiling~
M

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