Let God Take Care of Forever

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Open Poetry #36

Let God Take Care of Forever

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-10-26 12:24 PM

Let God Take Care of Forever

When you lose someone you love,
your whole world seems to get
a little smaller, smiles become
a lot rarer, and you feel like
the pain will never go away.
Still, I believe that love is
a lifetime endeavor, so I'll
let love live on with every
breath that I take, and let
God take care of forever.

JamesLee
October22
2005

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2005-10-26 01:08 AM

I have to say that rocked! Nice write.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-10-26 09:13 AM

Still, I believe that love is
a lifetime endeavor, so I'll
let love live on with every
breath that I take, and let
God take care of forever.

yes, and He is so taking care of you in there, in that endless breath of forever

Loved this

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-10-26 07:25 PM

Thank you Green and Lee J for the nice responses....James

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2005-10-27 12:30 PM

Sometimes I look at my life and see everything slipping away. Everyone I love and know seems to go. This is encouraging--I'll leave it in God's hands for a while.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-10-27 12:36 PM

Yes..let Him take care of forever..
well said James.
Hugs.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

6 posted 2005-10-27 01:27 PM

I believe that love is
a lifetime endeavor

All of your poem caught my attention
But most of all this line.

Bravo

Tom

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