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Open Poetry #36

Copper Spirals

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-10-25 05:09 PM

Regret.

Sundown wraps copper spirals
around a peacock sky;
ends a day rimmed in brown denials
of guilt,
of love,
of lies.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2005-10-25 05:57 PM

A piece of art, this!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-10-25 07:13 PM

May your sunsets be glorious and may you have no regrets as the sun slips out of sight.

Nan, your poem had an undercurrent of deep emotion ~ and I felt it.

Sending you a warm, loving, hug,
Linda

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-10-25 07:42 PM

Nan~
I KNEW from the title that it would be special ... it is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2005-10-27 12:36 PM

Thanks guys. You wouldn't believe how many times I rewrote this one, as short as it is.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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