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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
She walked and worked the neighbourhood Bent on revenge He walked and worked a stage Bent on himself She used her own desires To achieve her own desires He used skills To be his own desires She never forgot Her ability to damage He never forgot His ability to handle Never did they forget That revenge is tasted sweeter cold Nor that emotion Never grows cold But only grows old When nothing is left To be sold But emotion That has made both Old |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, what an interesting write! loved the wisdom. And WELCOME to Pips! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a lesson learned long ago good write here |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
But when do we learn to stop Bodger |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If we're smart, Bodger, we never stop learning... or realizing that there is always something new, even in our little part of the world. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Echoing dixie Very true..... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed.... we must stop and recondition our nature, otherwise, we stagnate our life as well as the lives of others.... |
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passionatepoet Junior Member
since 2005-07-11
Posts 10 |
i really enjoyed you're write. I think we never actually learn to learn when to stop. We learn the lesson but is learning it really supposed to make us stop? |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sometime one does learn, and does all to make things right. but the other does not allow it so it never changes My spirit will rise |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
had to read again. wise words here My spirit will rise |
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