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to baby from abby to maybe to bliss |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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There will come a time of this when blackberries will grow like fists staining our white picket fence and will you love me then? there will come a time of thus tomatoes, on the stakes, they must be watered twice a day or bust or worms will enter in... Oh will you love me then? And when I'm old and fat and gray and my rocker's rocked a sway of groove before the hearth and hey? Would you gather me my wood? (You know I'd love you then...) I will knit a woolly cap for where your hair was once and that is where my fingers trace the track of my heartbeat on your head lightly, as you sleep. (You drool.) I kiss you, right there on your tooth. You warm your hands within my old, maps... and will you love me then? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
who the hell knows, ya know? you have today only, ya know? yes you do................. but i dig the thoughts here |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
I think that is best way to grow old... with a a loving family (members). Enjoyed! [This message has been edited by JesusChristPose (10-23-2005 11:10 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And when I'm 63? You brought some wonderful memories back to me...as you do... Thank you, little one! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Karen, this is just beautful. So tender and loving.. Yet another keeper for my library. This one is going to stay on my mind for a long long time. Love ya lady~  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I will knit a woolly cap for where your hair was once and that is where my fingers trace the track of my heartbeat on your head OMG. I had to stop reading right there and wipe away tears. This oh, so tender piece must have been written on moss growin' on those weary, New Orleans trees.  Keepin' this! luv ya, Chrislane |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
The poems we love the best are the ones where we can see our reflection.. loved this. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Serenity Blaze, you rock me with every write. May your blaze forever burn! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen....Lovely sweet feeling to this getting old....I think I'll take some of what you're having.  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
And now, I know you are psychic! Loved this, Serenity! So much love in your words. You know, I heard some serious guitar pickin' behind the "lyrics" here -- seriously, it would make some great folk rock. ...jojo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Back for seconds. You're so clever, you are! Four stages, hmmmmm....I hope so. ......jojo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
you know the answer m'dearie  lady serenity, you WERE talkin about your readers, weren't you?  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I will knit a woolly cap for where your hair was once and that is where my fingers trace the track of my heartbeat on your head" ~ That is such a warm and wonderful expression of love! God bless you both!  Linda |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Believe it or not... you took me back to my childhood with this. sigh, my heart smiles big m'lady. "Oh will you love me then?" Oh how can one not  m xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I do NOT drool!!! (except when I read your work) |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yes always beautiful |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful My spirit will rise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thanks all and |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Will we be loved while charm fades on, When life will pass from dawn to dawn. Will we be roses, still bright with glow. We make that day now, 'twas ever so. Wonderful writing, I'm so glad you're back. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I love you now. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hugging you tight Susan C! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
me too... now...and forever...  "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*smiling* Bri and Susan said it all. (and Dylan) *grin* |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And then you go and leave me speechless.... *G* Where's the fairness? LOL |
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