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Open Poetry #36

Tanka..(the calendar..)

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2005-10-22 02:54 PM

the calendar
confirms it is not mine
still, I assuage her
on the phone—and bless the birth,
despite our ripples of calm wailing

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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2005-10-22 03:00 PM

good . . .

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-10-22 03:31 PM

excellent !!
Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-10-22 03:35 PM

Oh yes!
Direct and to the point.
Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

Constance
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since 2001-07-28

Posts 393
Ohio

4 posted 2005-10-22 03:35 PM

I liked this very much. It did what I like a good poem to do. It made me sense things--pain--resignation--then left my mind questioning. Very nice.

Smiles,
Constance

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-10-22 04:03 PM

Spiros~
There is a sad prevail to the poetic wail~

Very effectively penned~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-10-23 01:53 AM

Much enjoyed!

aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

7 posted 2005-10-23 04:04 AM

there is much that hides between these lines
a story deep in space
dreamy in a way
~auju w

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

8 posted 2005-10-24 04:29 AM

..thank you all who read and commented;
it is very much appreciated

spiros
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