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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
cold, clear water lightly lapped at them on the lakeshore in the early morning light crisp air breezed through rattling leaves on the trees, perhaps a message from heaven... something that would make me feel a lot but I thought it not something I wanted to know stones in smooth and oval timelessness captivated me, as if to notice them at all would bring a sense of life through some mystical connection they were sacred then... I feel sad sometimes... a kind of lonely that makes me want to be alone |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gorgeous writing! And, undertand.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, I to have touched and felt what you describe...simply lovely writting! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kahlil, Smooth stones remind me of the endless polishing of life. Enjoyed |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thank you. I found some of my notes from two years ago when it seemed that doom was knocking on my door. It was an interesting exercise to go back in time and write from those thoughts and emotions. Yes, the endless polishing of life. K |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Kahlil, I loved this write! especially this: stones in smooth and oval timelessness captivated me, |
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