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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-10-21 09:08 AM



    


A Read of Mind


In the mixing and the churning
Of the water and the air
On the rocks of millennium
Shines the chaos of the wear

In the power of illusion
The bright, lights up the dark
And a moment stands forever
In the instant of a spark

In the magic of fantasy
Delusion takes its shape
A firefly within a core
An instant shroud of drape

A life of fragmentation
The smallest look of grime
But in the moments start and end
There is the all of time

I see the chaos in it’s wend
I see the chaos of the end



    



    



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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-10-21 09:20 AM


quote:

In the power of illusion
The bright, lights up the dark
And a moment stands forever
In the instant of a spark




Wonderful words to accompany equally wonderful pictures, dear Seymour!

I love it!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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2 posted 2005-10-21 09:35 AM


Wow !! This took me by surprise this morning Seymour. What glorious pics with this awesome write. More words to ponder today. Thankyou.     hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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3 posted 2005-10-21 09:41 AM


In the mixing and the churning
Of the water and the air
On the rocks of millennium
Shines the chaos of the wear

In the power of illusion
The bright, lights up the dark
And a moment stands forever
In the instant of a spark
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A life of fragmentation
The smallest look of grime
But in the moments start and end
There is the all of time

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
just look what you do with the "chaos"...
you turn it into rhymes of millennium.

thank you me sweet Sy-guy

*ww*






Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-10-21 09:49 AM


JM
You have no idea How you and your pictures affect me.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2005-10-21 10:22 AM


Margherita
Thank you sweet.

Chris,
You are a doll.

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2005-10-21 11:06 AM


Goood moooorning, Mr. T. ~

You gift us with treats for the mind ~ as well as for the eyes!

Angel hugs 'n kisses,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-10-21 11:11 AM


Earth Angel
And you treat me with hugs and kisses.

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8 posted 2005-10-21 12:28 PM


Awesome write Seymour!

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-10-21 12:30 PM


Ericc
A large thank you.

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10 posted 2005-10-21 12:33 PM


Sy

I'd know the camera's eye anywhere, and also the words of the poet.  A wonderful combination!!  

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-10-21 12:40 PM


Martie
And I know that response sweety.

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2005-10-21 01:57 PM



In response to your reply, ~ "Indeed, I do!"


Linda

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-10-21 02:27 PM


Earth Angel
And an Angel too.

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14 posted 2005-10-21 02:38 PM


Sy this is a truly wonderful combination of words and picture.  And most inspiring.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2005-10-21 02:56 PM


scorpio
What a nice response, thank you.

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16 posted 2005-10-22 03:02 AM


you are an inspiration, sir

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2005-10-22 08:37 AM


MGROVES
You make it so.

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18 posted 2005-12-13 07:35 AM


and i thankyou

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2005-12-13 07:48 AM


MGROVES

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