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Open Poetry #36
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-10-20 02:31 PM


Silver streaks
Across the floor
Taking a place
Where you should be
And in an absence
Let me sing
Of beauty— love
And other things
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-10-20 02:39 PM

wow.

You rhymed!

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet
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2 posted 2005-10-21 10:49 AM

enjoyed
bernie

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3 posted 2007-04-23 12:53 PM

very good.
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