Haiku ( I forgot which number)

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Open Poetry #36

Haiku ( I forgot which number)

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2005-10-20 07:35 AM

Listen to the warm
Fading deeper into night
More everyday

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-10-20 07:55 AM

waiting for the warm
to fade deeper into thoughts
until felt in real

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2005-10-20 12:29 PM

Prof,
I think I have felt that before.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

3 posted 2005-10-20 01:20 PM

This was a nice haiku.

Poetry is beauty in words.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2005-10-20 03:55 PM

The warm is now lost
Fading deeper and deeper
Till winter turns spring

Thank you, Larry C
Poetry is about touching similarity
And bringing back their emotions and thoughts

Thank you, sweetpoetress,
Pleased you enjoyed.

Gloom

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