Open Poetry #36 |
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Mumsy's Autumn Day |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Mumsy’s Autumn Day She woke up in the morning saw the sun was going to shine donned her boots and orange goggles “this autumn day is mine” chop chop chop out came the hatchet as she hacked at thick old stems of moldy blue hydrangea and she offered no amends as she scalped off all the roses from the bush, with some old saw and yanked up all the daisies with a stick that had a claw oops, pressure washed the preacher when he stopped by for a chat she was so rattled when he left she weed whacked Vern’s old cat the neighbor thinks she’s charming “that little lady’s sweet” but she threw her trash bags in his truck as he drove down the street finally she surveyed her work a wind blew from the east and formed a cloud of dry leaves from the neighbor’s dogwood tree they clattered down the sidewalk and danced madly in the grass she stood there in the middle waved her arms and laughed and laughed the wind was warm and wild and she curtsied to one knee “thanks for the ovation, mother nature, just for me” |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Kahlil I applaud you for such a wonderful write which brought a smile to my face. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wonderful! Much enjoyed. Library clicked. ![]() |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Wonderful! ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
K ~ You just wrote yourself a winner! This was superb! Totally a joy to read and to savour! ![]() Sending you a BIG hug! EA |
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