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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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White silk, obliterating drained grey world, wonderous brume absorbtion. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Phil. Perhaps it is just too early in the morning for me, but though I have a sense of peace with your words, I do not understand them.  Could you explain it to me. I will then go back and read it with a clearer mind and eyes! lol  Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~filtering an object in an opaque finish...adjusting the view, softening the edges of reality~ am I viewing this through your lenses? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
If Kacy is seeing through your lenses, I like the view! lol |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful, Phil. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very nicely done Phil. Hugs. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thanks to everyone who replied it is much appreciated, perhaps a little explanation is required, Opacity deals with the theme of fog, i was on a train, and the fog came rolling in,and it was like white silk, obliterating the dirty grey day of autumn. The word ''Brume'' is just a different word for ''fog'' and so the fog ''absorbs'' the world from view, opaquely softening it, rendering it invisible. Thank you again... Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aha! Your explanation does indeed give added meaning and beauty to your words! Thank you for the explanation! As a true poet, you observe the world around you, assimilate it, and then turn it into fascinating poetry. Have a glorious weekend! Linda |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I've never heard the word brume for fog, but it certainly makes sense now in this write. I love fog, except when I have to drive in it.  |
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