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Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2005-10-18 02:13 AM

I'm the ghost-like image of your past
Begging to be part of your future
I can't live like this forever
And I want to erase my self
Completely from your fragile heart

My prison is the guilt I feel
When I look over and see you

It's magnified when glances meet
Our eyes locked until I crumble
And then look away from your face

And so I return to the lake
Where I am bound by the moons light
And evil forces which make me
Into the enchanted creature
which you now shoot down before you

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

[This message has been edited by Juju (10-18-2005 11:36 PM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-10-18 09:39 AM

SweetLady~
There is a word-lilt of melancholy that seeps through this piece~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-10-18 12:09 PM

juju, that was an exceptionally enchanting, yet melancholy, piece of writing.

Exquisite!

EA

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-10-18 01:10 PM

Oh, what a touching piece! Awesome Juju!
hugging you for this, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

4 posted 2005-10-18 05:37 PM

Bless you JuJu, you are a swan princess. I have a hard time beliving any evil force holds any power over you.:-)

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-10-20 05:53 PM

I appreciate all of your replies. I have been so busy lately. I promise on one of my breaks I will have time to read every one's wonderful posts at pip!

Lots of love,

Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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