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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-07-12 09:44 AM

Eyes Opened to the See

I sail these days alone in thought,
Eyes opened to the see
Wanting just the equal of
A spirit's company.

On whom can bounce my whim of fancy
Spread my touch, expand
Increase my scope of afternow
Unfolding love's demand.

Here I sit between those lines,
My mark made by this type
Bounded only by the string
Of letters and their hype.

Ordered so, to read upon
For some though, in between
An alley, back behind the walls,
The passage still unseen.

To clear the way, for colors bright
To rainbow each of days.
This heat has paid its price to me,
I sit as time delays.

Allowing me the presence of
An interlude's enjoy
Slowing down decision's need
Instead with words I toy.

You know, conditions of the day
Lead me to think in dreams
Where here they lay between the lines
In quiet, silent screams.

M
inspired by GlOOm's
When sleep make dreams
Out of silent screams

and Seymour's sailing thoughts

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-07-12 10:33 AM

Gwad, this was brilliant and most bittersweet!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2005-07-12 06:06 PM

Whatever inspired this awesome write I salute. A great piece of work Maureen.

passionatepoet
Junior Member

since 2005-07-11

Posts 10

3 posted 2005-07-12 11:27 PM

that was beautiful. I never would be able to write like that. Oh thanks for the encouragement on my first post it was really sweet! CARINA

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-07-13 09:18 AM

Thank you Lee and Sharon...it's always nice to be inspired when this continuous heat and humidity slows my brain

passionatepoet...I just combined a few thoughts and rearranged the words...nothing to it. I am sure you will be able to create some great poems. Welcome

M

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-07-14 01:05 AM

Gloom does inspire!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-07-15 04:05 AM

excellent

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

7 posted 2005-07-15 04:56 AM

A good write here M...there is a tad of sadness here...but a fine write..thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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