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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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stand willing it lays comatose in wait attempting fate by think words breaking all laws of realism commanding political conditions meaningful interlocking sequence some silk screen of constellations closing off, fading black ribs of nuisance puddling sound, like a learning guitar recorded on blank papers of the mind free lance discovery… dreaming dozens of robust auctions in a genuine city, named camaraderie scanning an echelon of lights subtleties of some silence accentual perception confessing touching frozen limbs like a centerpiece of perception unlocking, death trends to a gathering place of birth bringing fullness to serious tragic attributes like a tv with eyes fishing in the darkness pouring out a ravishing daylight stating, “lets dust the jacket of broad-shouldered clumsiness skipping for a while gravity of middlebrow burlesque slumming, a comical tree’s determination forming some willing magic carpet nonsensical, surrealism taps me with morose soberness & sporty childlike dream it is then, the ferocity of my singleness, manifests the poetica of an audacious turn one with subtle whimpers of somewhere i feel moving water with familiar impulses it is a refreshing dip of nudity… with cheerful breezy puns squishing entrée it is then, philosophical throws me a measuring tape with full hair pledging allegiance to moments that failed understanding reason for grooming a coiling voice fevers one word coffee? [This message has been edited by LeeJ (07-12-2005 09:08 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Clever and enjoyed the end. Good morning sweet. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and all of that before coffee.. amazing enjoyed it lee j |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...bringing fullness to serious tragic attributes like a tv with eyes fishing in the darkness pouring out a ravishing daylight stating, “lets dust the jacket of broad-shouldered clumsiness skipping for a while... ~*~ Want some cream for that coffee, Lee? That's how I take mine - and sometimes, with Irish blending, too...  I love the way your mind works! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Whoa! Couldn't help but grin at the ending. Loved it. ....jo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You create perfection LeeJ. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this is cool  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sheer unique writing Lee...thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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