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Whole New World |
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RennieandBoo Junior Member
since 2003-09-02
Posts 47Florida! |
Starting off on a whole new world all by my self what can I do? who can I be? everything is not what it seems such horror such fear hearing so many stories of our cruel reality how can I survive? how can I conguer the world and make it be on my side? Mother says "Don't worry you'll be fine" with a tear in her eye Father gave a grunt and a pat on the back Brother and sister says " don't bother to look back what can I do? who can I be? Everything is not what it seems How can I survive? how can I conquer the world and make it on my side? Each one of us deserves some special lovin! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
A question we all ask I like the words Bodger |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
First, take one dream... know your goal, then life and you? Will complete a whole... Sounds to me as if your parents know it's time to leave the nest. Chin up! You're about to create a whole new world, and it should be the best time ... let your ingenuity shine! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RennieandBoo A common problem, enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
nice poem. instead of trying to conquer the world be a friend to it and it will be on your side -may the force be with you in poetry |
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