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Open Poetry #36

One more and I disappear for the week

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-10-16 04:06 PM

We all write stuff and consider it rubbish and then creap back and look at the origin of our thoughts and words captured in a moment we often want to forget

Ice for me is something I wrote, created but never understood as with previous works

They were there in my thoughts and with their meanings did they give birth to meaning or merely coast. (the full stop is for Sunshine and her comments on my use of commas, et al!? or ?!)

dave

Ice

On a pure crystal
You weave
Magic woven desire
Winging to failure
Desiring domination of those you desire
Freezing comfort
Beneath hell bent ire
Drying spiraling wings
Swooping to
Dream
Desire
Control
Magic
Heating words
To dissolve love to feeling
Songs no love heard
Heat melting every seam
Heart bursting every dream
Melting stars to die
Flooding rivers to desire
Your dream of failure
Rocks calm your flight to fire
Torrents race to your ire
Frenzied peace
Warms your heart
Cold love your birth to start

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2005-10-16 08:42 PM

WOW, well said, dave, very well said

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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