Open Poetry #36 |
Release Me To The Wind |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Release Me To The Wind ~*Marge Tindal*~ as ~SkyeLara~ When I am but stardust once more, my Spirit free for the all of time release me to the wind, my friend knowing I will word-return for the good of all mankind~ When an unexpected breeze catches you mid-sentence in a thought of rhyme, let me word-race through your mind with inked inspire of my sending~ Bending the lush rush grasses in the swirling ink-of-think just as I promised I would When I word-come again resting upon the page blue … oh, so blue with gifting words that you know I promised to you~ Never more free in Spirit am I than the next gentle breeze that catches you word-cavorting barefooted leaving you breathless in the drink of ink~ ~Because ~SkyeLara~ breathes through me ... gifting me with word-promises of more to come~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Our greatest gift are the thoughts we write that touch and inspire... |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Madame Marge as Lady Lara...this was a powerful piece! The language was captivating and the images were vivid! I loved this piece! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge, may you continue to be at one with the wind while breathing in the gift of SkyeLara's words. Love & Spirit Light, EO |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And what a gift to be able to breathe through SkyeLara. Beautiful Marge. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a rare, beauty you are, marge,m'friend My spirit will rise |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very pretty, Marge! |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Beautiful Marge! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I know your words will last eternal, Marge! I loved the way you shaped part of this poem into an arrowhead. ..........jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I soooo enjoy being with SkyeLara ... she brings the wisdome of words for sharing~ JO !!! How perceptive of you to have noticed and mention the arrowhead ... funny thing ... it just fell to the page that way .... must have been the intend of SkyeLara for it to happen that way~ You friends are all so wonderful to allow me to share~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge/SkyeLara*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Marge This is wonderful! Thank you for sharing SkyeLara with us all here in PiP! Love Isobel xo |
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Isobel Senior Member
since 2004-01-17
Posts 529Qld, Australia |
Dear Marge This is wonderful! Thank you for sharing SkyeLara with us all here in PiP! Love Isobel xo |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Marge, I find it very comforting to think there are sweet spirits like yours blowin on the wind, to help us along lifes pathway. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoying your word-i-ness M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanking both Steven and MzWynter ... I have no alternative ... SkyeLara speaks ... I have only to listen and to share~ *Huglets* ~*Marge/SkyeLara*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Your Skyelara poetry is always haunting and beautiful! Love Betty Lou |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BettyLou~ I am tardy in my thankee ... but it's sincerely meant~ Wishing you the best of the upcoming Christmas holiday~ Hoping my Ronnie is doing all better~ I sure love that fella~ Hi Ronnie~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Loving the release of these words! Yes, your words remain! Very, very much enjoyed, Marge. miscellanea |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you Marge, for this exquisite poem and line of thought. I am going to read this over and over . . . and over. I don't understand about Skyelara. At first I thought that she was another identity of you (perhaps your nom de plume in another poetry forum, or here, previously). Then I thought that perhaps she is somebody who has passed on and was close to you. Then I thought that perhaps I am wrong about that. Perhaps I am out of line asking, but if am not, please tell me. Whoever she is, she seems a wonderful person/spirit/identity and very inspirational. - Owl |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marge, this is so beautiful. We are glad to have you share with us. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Beautiful and inspiring Marge, hope you're well, it sounds as if you are. Making me think this morning... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge, your poetry always touches my heart, no matter what the subject, and today this is especially true...'S' |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Very insightful...we are all stardust. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Never stop word weaving for us the vision that are gifted to you for they word breath life into our souls....A stunning write that I was drawn into as you let me word share your inner heart....I love it and the feel of it in my soul....***big hugs*** |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ What a lovely surprise to see SkyeLara and the kind comments from you all~ Thank you, Miscellanea, for the back page read~ And Diana/OwlSA ... SkyeLara is the Spirited muse of my Native American Indian poetry who gifts me with the words to share~ I SO appreciate each of you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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