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Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-10-16 03:29 PM

For Jean

and so we sometimes

Begin again, or not - decisions are never yours no matter what you think

Bodger

Your eyes dirty
Mascara running from tears you welcomed
Making you all the more beautiful
And human
Washing your cheeks and backbone
To flooding anguish
And things I could live with
To welcome a love ripping you apart
Bisecting you from all you valued
And all your family believed in
For something you didn't know existed
Love
Smiling grin, troubled eyes, knowledge, pain
Smiling my love
My love my smile
My love

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-10-16 03:30 PM

Mascara running from tears you welcomed
Making you all the more beautiful
And human
Washing your cheeks and backbone
To flooding anguish
And things I could live with

~*~

DAMN!

Thank you.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-10-16 03:35 PM

Sunshine

Dave

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2005-10-16 05:50 PM

Now this I like ... alot !!
Good one Dave! hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2005-10-16 06:10 PM

Well said, the emotions so well described.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-10-16 07:40 PM

Love this one Dave.
WOW! Excellent write.
Hugs~Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me.~

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-10-16 08:37 PM

powerfull

nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2005-10-31 11:32 PM

Enjoyed...James

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2005-11-01 12:10 PM

Oh! I like this one. And it is so true that decisions are never yours no matter what you think, especially with affairs of the heart.

....jo

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-11-02 09:40 AM

loved the admiration you showed for this person, the understanding to accept her in all her glorious ways, no matter what mistakes she's made or she's about to make, your allowing her to be her glorious own identity, and love her for it.

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