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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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freethinkers in boyhood we are! oh, for that blue-eyed etiquette that swings about! pouring money like a hobby into progressive dinning halls groping their way along moonlight silver all four corners, daring enormous that’s right! examine a scarlet empire those tickling dimensions of face predicting multimedia change gleams like a river, those English lords strutting grace while snapping their fingers to a Viennese orchestra drawing words for the ladies, helping them out of their story book carriages symbolic of a good priest, examining shores of two handed steel, with long necks of great rapport playing Mozart like some European artist! Your words sparkle mild dark eyes Like anxiety having it’s time with life defiant on a threshold of exclamations! “yes you are”, you worldwide soloist wondering bout nature, & the trance at the Café-Restarant Residenz mincing terms with music stores intimate conceiving truth, quite fresh, alive…deliberate! capturing my soul & wildly uncovering it. i’m wondering what low voice pretence will face the next minute? will it be a whole city, rising? rising for the first time? flashing naked one hundred yards up the road? process a focus, lay down your swords make me shutter , grimace and bolt turn up the power with endless creation gesture a turning-point of subsistence into a millionaire’s prose talk of pleasant things, while stuffing dollars in my dress…you wicked relinquishing paragraph leaving me accurately content… dripping great grins with 5 a.m. cheers Like the warm arms of Sir Elliot Valet a beginning Indulge in romance Promoted failings shouts imagination in my face dissolving ruddy mud submissively wandering within wet white hair like some mortal cupid browsing a rigid tongue of fresh and humorous words small breasts grasping at warm southern air bluberry mountains cherished friends dream my hands worthy, of marble dominions rapid fire impetuous trance lead me toward today’s, clenched bloody hands so that I, may stolidly conjuror great deals where thought joins the church, of green dawned surreal I am a fawn holding a royal flush examining cuts across parchment planting rhododendrons, a few yards away oh, pick up my book & please enter this way we’ll shock coincidence, into a second glance withering features, like a beggars Vienna a clerical Ivan the Great, flipping cordial nods where you, for a moment, hoist me beyond and for that particular instant, in time life becomes a promising rhyme make me your slave burn me alive take me to Rome fancy sounds with a writer's ohm bouncing sky into cerulean clear blue passing time, with warm blooded rue climbing your stairs with deep hungry eyes oh those, summer days, that put up one hell of a fight [This message has been edited by LeeJ (10-13-2005 10:19 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
BAM BAM-BAM and smile? There is just so much here, but might I just say? There's something infinitely intriguing about anyone who writes with such passion. (Okay...she turned me on.  I admit it.) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Lovely Lee! ~ and a mighty fine "freethinker" ye be! An amazing write chock-full of unique, fascinating and memorable lines! ...Gosh! I was just now attempting to quote a few of them and realized that I would be repeating the entire poem! May the ink never cease to flow from thy illustrious pen! Hugs with love, Linda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
all of that and a hand growing out of your shoulder too amazing skin showing ms.. from your heart ribs pretty too |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, the first question was going to be... where did this come from? Then, from our conversations, I decided not to ask, knowing better.  As I continued through this history... I then decided it was a bit of the Brothers Grimm... and more. You do make me smile, with where your talents wander...  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
IF only I could think like you write.... Well done LeeJ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lee Ice cream full of fruit to boot. Always enjoy the inner rind. Good morning sweet. |
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