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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2005-10-13 02:30 AM


Four Days Is Not That Long

My honey's going
to Chicago
to visit
her sister
and mom.
I'm going
to miss her
like crazy.
Fortunately,
four days
is not that
long.

JamesLee
October10
2005
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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2005-10-13 02:34 AM

Someday, when I have the time....I'm going to read all your poems together.  I think it would make quite a sweet collection (and may there's an idea for a beautiful gift for your honeydew!)  Enjoyed this.   ....jo
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-10-14 06:48 PM

Thank you iliana...thats kind of you...James
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