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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2005-10-12 03:45 PM

Dark

but there...

and there...

and over there...

steaks of light
dancing across the sky

"falling stars"

appeals to the artist
much more than

"meteors"

and so I shove the
scientist in me
to the back
and let the artist fly

just in time to see
a star fall from Heaven itself
and explode in a bright flash
of white and purple
and blue and pink

and the endless galaxy
remains in its
continual, silent, spin

though tears stream down
my face

and then He created the horse...

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2005-10-12 03:51 PM

Skyfire

It's good to "let the artist fly"! I enjoyed reading your poem.

PS You have a lovely smile!

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-10-12 03:52 PM

Lovely write Sky.
much enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-10-12 04:05 PM

Much enjoyed the read Rhonda!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-10-12 07:36 PM

Rhonda~
Such a wistfully beautiful penning~
Even through tears ... you have touched the palette of poetic artistry~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-10-12 07:43 PM

Skyfire ~

What a delight to see your beautiful smiling face and to read your equally beautiful piece of poetry! ~ which was "stellar"!

Sending you big, warm hug,
EA

Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

6 posted 2005-10-12 09:03 PM

wow youre a great poet this was awesome thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2005-10-12 09:09 PM

Come here you, I wanna give you a hug.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

8 posted 2005-10-12 10:10 PM

This Poem was very uplifting for me, and I do thankyou for sharing this.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

9 posted 2005-10-12 11:45 PM

the artist's heart and eyes puts the scientist of you in perspective

and its a beautiful sight

you are a meteor, m'friend

ride that beam of starlight

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

10 posted 2005-10-13 10:40 AM

Great writing Rhonda, nice to see you posting again

Andrew

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

11 posted 2005-10-18 08:39 PM

Rhonda,
Can't let you just slip away. Miss ya' sweetie.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

12 posted 2005-10-18 09:21 PM

Everything is beautiful,it's all in how you look at it. Let the artist fly! Loved it Skyfire.

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